Larisa

Larisa is from Odessa, UA

She registered on 2010-03-19 at 10:14:31, last logged in on 2010-06-27 at 12:48:34 and was last active on 2010-09-05 at 00:10:08
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Set Me Free by mussygal
You only live once, so make the most of it. by AngelDemon88
The Girl On The Corner by mussygal
Rebel - with a cause by rhumour
The Grin on the Face of the Hound by omronicus

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Comment By mussygal on 2010-09-04 at 12:27:25
Hi Larisa, thank you for the lovely comments on Set Me Free and also for faving it. love, Carol
Comment By mussygal on 2010-08-28 at 22:10:21
Hi Larisa..thank you so much for the nice comment on Poem Of Love. Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment By JacobHoggardRocks on 2010-08-24 at 15:43:49
Any time ! I'm glad I was given the opportunity to read your magnificent work ! Your friend most sincerely, Hannah
Comment By ogar on 2010-08-22 at 04:48:00
Thank you for your coment on Think About It. I appreciate all feed back.
Comment By mussygal on 2010-08-17 at 21:17:17
Congrats on the poem of the day, Larisa!! You deserved it of course with your thoughtful words of truth. hugs and smiles, Carol
Comment By nicegirl90 on 2010-08-16 at 19:36:59
i like the poem life is short
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-08-11 at 03:22:24
Hi Larisa - thanks for your comments on 'Rebel' - I woke early this morning with the idea in my head so it was one that had to pour out . Oh, and I have replied to you on the other site earlier - Best wishes, Dave
Comment By omronicus on 2010-08-02 at 15:46:10
I'm blushing now. Thank you...Doug
Comment By omronicus on 2010-08-02 at 09:15:02
Just to let you know I had to re-submit my poem True Love never Dies because for some reason it was removed.
Comment By omronicus on 2010-08-02 at 05:52:47
Thanks for your generous comment on Old Love. Much appreciated
Comment By omronicus on 2010-07-29 at 03:09:48
Hello Larisa, thanks for your kind comment on "The Girl is alone..." this looks like a very friendly site
Comment By mussygal on 2010-07-26 at 19:40:25
Hi dear Larisa, Thank you for liking my poem, Special Man and commenting on it.. hugs...Carol
Comment By TG on 2010-07-23 at 07:38:59
your very much welcome ! c:
Comment By mussygal on 2010-07-20 at 19:23:34
Hi Larisa, Thanks so much for your comment on Forever Loved. I did edit it especially in the first stanza..it wasn't quite the way I wanted.. Hugs...Carol
Comment By SHARON on 2010-07-18 at 11:06:55
Hi Larisa Congratulations! I am glad to see your poem win! ..Hugs Sharon...
Comment By mussygal on 2010-07-17 at 14:49:24
Hi Larisa, thank you for the sweet comment on 'I Am Thankful'... warm hugs.. Carol
Comment By mussygal on 2010-07-16 at 19:26:10
Congrats for winning the Golden Pen, dear Larisa. It was truely a golden pen that wrote it. love and hugs...Carol
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-07-16 at 16:09:31
Hugs - Congratulations my friend, I am very pleased for you winning the Golden Pen :) Best wishes, Dave
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-07-15 at 14:05:48
Thank you Larissa for your response to 'Loves Aura', so pleased you like it :) Best wishes, Dave
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-07-05 at 15:19:47
Heello Larisa many thanks for your comments on 'Lonely Ness' :) Glad you liked it my friend. Best wishes Dave
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-07-04 at 15:27:31
Hi there Larisa,Thanks for the kind comment on Midnight cry. Blessings,Veronica
Comment By mussygal on 2010-07-04 at 10:35:45
Hi Larisa, thanks so much for your comment, The One She Chose.. You are so right about souls. We see the beauty or beastly from inside a person's heart. Warm hugs..Carol
Comment By zysh345 on 2010-06-25 at 21:03:53
your poem reveals and endless love, a love that is broad and beautiful. Your love transcends that shame of the many, the many whos love is often shallow. Zishan
Comment By EazyRymer on 2010-06-09 at 22:48:39
You are so welcome my dearest sister in Christ !!
Comment By mussygal on 2010-06-09 at 17:15:55
Hi Larisa, thanks for the sweet comment on my page. I think when people get together with a love of writing, we help make each other better, so now I am hoping for the words to flow and grow within me too. hugs and love..Carol
Comment By EazyRymer on 2010-06-09 at 08:04:10
Thanks so much for the sweet comment on poem hun back in April. I apreciate that and do apologize for not getting to you sooner. Hugs !!
Comment By leadonna12 on 2010-06-06 at 14:39:23
Thank my dear friend for a thought well taken, And sharing your pen with me, it is wonderful to share thoughts with other;s who have the same understanding and compassion, the observation of life and soul your friend Donna
Comment By mussygal on 2010-06-06 at 13:39:10
Hi Larisa, thank you for your comment on Men.. I still enjoy having my hand kissed..such a sweet gesture. warmest thoughts.. Carol
Comment By mussygal on 2010-05-31 at 11:04:23
Hi Larisa, thank you for the comments on Hold Onto... I love all of your new poems too.. hugs.Carol
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-05-29 at 20:31:22
Time is moving ever so fast now, where pleasant thoughts must be the norm. Warmest wishes and best regards.
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-05-29 at 19:47:34
Glad I could clear that up; its all about the metaphorical love of the muse in the amusing maze, where some beings fight way too hard if they don't understand Agape love.
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-05-29 at 19:34:27
The AM, FM, and XM bands I am speaking about are radio waves or stations. AM is typically weather and talk radio, FM is typically music stations, and XM is satellite radio where the listener has many choices, so I am talking about metaphorical stars like U2.
Comment By Larisa on 2010-05-29 at 18:27:39
AM and PM are quite understandable things, but.... FM and XM are very complicated. My English is very poor. Please, explain! With warmest wishes, Laura
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-05-29 at 17:55:47
It is like the rising of Sirius then has happened first with AM, then FM, then XM bands to hear Eminem squaring sevens at 8 Mile.
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-05-29 at 16:59:01
I imagined it as the Altair Vega Cowherder story, but Alpha and Beta make better sense after re-reading it. Following is my confusion, According to Chinese legend the love story is about the 7th daughter of Emperor of Heaven and an orphaned cowherd. They were separated by the Emperor. The 7th daughter was forced to move to the star Vega and the cowherd moved to the star Altair. The beloved couple, a cowherder and a weaver, are allowed to meet only once a year in heaven on this day.
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-05-28 at 20:00:01
Hi Larisa,Happy birthday to you,happy birthday to you,happy birthday dear Larisa,happy birthday to you and many more. Love,Veronica
Comment By leadonna12 on 2010-05-23 at 16:09:07
thank you so very much for reading my works I greatly appreciate it sending hugs to you I enjoy your work
Comment By sharon slaton howell on 2010-05-23 at 08:26:47
Hi pretty lady, be sure and see my comment on your comment on that doggie story!
Comment By leadonna12 on 2010-05-22 at 13:17:50
Thank you for taking the time to read
Comment By mussygal on 2010-05-20 at 15:33:05
Thank you, Larisa, for commenting on my poem First Born. I'm so glad you like it.
Comment By mussygal on 2010-05-19 at 11:04:05
Hi Larisa, thank you for commenting on ''For A Moment". I'm so glad you liked it. sending my love..Carol
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-05-18 at 13:10:34
Hi Larissa - thank you my friend for the comments today on 'Stillness' and 'SS Relation Ship' 2 :) best wishes, Dave
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-05-17 at 19:46:47
Thank you for your surmised summary of my poem. Life is good and every day is a new creation of our thoughts.
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-05-15 at 13:12:57
Hiya - 'Let's' is a gentle style of humour, perhaps not typically English, but I prefer a slightly subtle touch. Glad you like it :)
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-05-12 at 09:08:14
Such a sweet comment on Melchior the Mennonite.Blessings,Veronica
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-05-07 at 02:06:29
Thanks Larisa for you sweet comment on Turn off the light. This is the first free verse i`ve ever done. Blessings,Veronica
Comment By BbobbyrobertsS on 2010-05-07 at 01:30:58
I love you creative flow!
Comment By marja on 2010-05-02 at 02:35:16
yes we have public holiday on 1st May however as it fall on saturday, it was a weekend as usual.
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-05-01 at 10:11:28
Hi Larissa - thanks for commenting on 'There Was' - glad you liked it :) Best wishes, Dave
Comment By rich the poet on 2010-05-01 at 10:01:48
thank you for your nice words,,you are very creative,,enjoy all your writes..stay blessed ,.RICH
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-04-30 at 09:29:09
Hi Larisa, pleased you liked 'Candle Power' :) Best wishes, Dave
Comment By marja on 2010-04-25 at 12:42:03
Larisa.. thanks for your comments on "make me a memory" I wrote that long time ago and it is one of my favourite piece
Comment By marja on 2010-04-25 at 12:41:03

Comment By EazyRymer on 2010-04-19 at 14:07:35
Thanks for your wonderful comment but yours are wonderful as well my dear. Eazyrymer
Comment By ColinLee on 2010-04-16 at 18:23:46
Hello Larisa, thank you for your kind comments to my poetry, pleased you enjoyed. Mindhowyago Colin.
Comment By marja on 2010-04-15 at 09:55:31
Thanks Larisa on your comment on 'The man in Pink'. I love yur poem too.. keep writing.
Comment By bluelover on 2010-04-15 at 03:35:30
Hi Larisa, thanx for your nice comment and best wishes.. I like you poems, they are lovely..Take care of yourself and dont keep us without your poems.. :) they are very nice...Zeynep
Comment By rich the poet on 2010-04-13 at 20:43:33
Love reading your work..I am a fan...
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-04-13 at 18:50:10
Hi Larissa - many thanks my friend for your kind comments on 'And If' - best wishes, Dave
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-04-13 at 13:44:05
Thanks so much for your comment on prison of the mind.I have been caretaker of many with this disease.I always enjoy reading your poems.They touch my heart. Blessings,Veronica
Comment By valeria on 2010-04-12 at 21:00:17
very nice, Larisa. I like your poems and I like Odessa too,especially, Deribassovskaya!
Comment By marja on 2010-04-11 at 18:43:03
Thank you Larisa on yr comment (Let me be the ONE).. you write beautifully too
Comment By saif_poetry on 2010-04-11 at 06:14:01
dear larisa thank u very much for all ur lovely coments on my poems. Its gives me more inspiration to keep writting. And i will ofcours write more. Pray for me. Many many thanks once again. Saif
Comment By rich the poet on 2010-04-10 at 22:17:22
loved it! great piece..thanks for the share!
Comment By sharon slaton howell on 2010-04-08 at 08:54:05
Hi there, Guess what I'm listening to right now? The l8l2 overture by one of Russia's finest. Presume you love great Russian music and literature. It's such fun having a Russian-speaking friend! What I plan to do on your poems (you are one prolific little bunny rabbit) is comment in 3 different places probably, some that are private on PM, so as to not overwhelm people. Sharon
Comment By sharon slaton howell on 2010-04-07 at 18:18:00
Larisa, I'll have to compare your 2 poems. Thanks for getting back with a comment. I looked up Limerick on google and the definition I found was: a silly poem with 5 lines! Sharon
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-04-07 at 04:30:01
Thanks for your kind words on coal town sons. Please feel free to give me pointers as im a newby at this. Ive only written 3 pieces.Blessings, Veronica
Comment By TG on 2010-04-04 at 22:14:32
thank you very much! all your poems are very beautiful as well. im very flattered about your comment on my profile, :) thank you for the compliment
Comment By Larisa on 2010-03-25 at 10:25:10
Thank you dear Monica. I've got an email about new comment but couldn't see it. Best wishes. Larisa
Comment By Monica Aurora on 2010-03-25 at 10:15:22
"What is the colour of Love" is a very beautifully expressed poem,Larisa.
Comment By Larisa on 2010-03-24 at 18:06:26
No, my dear friend; I haven't been busy reading your poems. I enjoyed reading them. And when I enjoy something it's not a busy time for me. It's an enjoyable time. I can only thank you for giving me an opportunity to read your poems.
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-03-24 at 17:54:52
Many thanks for all your kind comments on my poems today Larissa - you have been busy reading haven't you! :)
Comment By Monica Aurora on 2010-03-24 at 07:07:32
Thanks Larisa for your nice comment on my poem about my late sister,Nita. She died in July 2007 and would have been 50 yrs. old in August2009.
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-03-23 at 05:17:03
Many thank for all the comments you have made on my poems today Larissa, you are very kind :)
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-03-21 at 08:10:38
Hi Larissa, thank you for your kind comments on my poems and profile - glad to know you are enjoying the site :)
Comment By RdotIncorporated on 2010-03-20 at 19:26:22
I hope leaving you speechless was a good thing
Comment By sharon slaton howell on 2010-03-20 at 05:20:29
Welcome, Larisa. I'm brand new to this site myself and have already met some very nice writers. Sharon
Comment By Larisa on 2010-03-19 at 16:07:37
Hi, my dear friends. I am Laura from Odessa, the most beautiful city not only in Ukraine but in the whole world. English is not my mother tongue but I love it, read a lot in English, sing songs in English, translate Russian romances into English and even write poems in English. I'll be happy to get your comments as they inspire me to write more and more. And I will certainly do the same, not in return but... 1. To share my thoughts with you. 2. To get more points. lol
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-03-19 at 12:17:26
Hi Larissa - hope you enjoy the site :) Best wishes Dave

I Am Laura\'s Stomach

 

I Am Laura’s Stomach

 

It’s Monday morning, she’s got up.

When I asked her for breakfast

she told me to shut up.

When I asked her for my porridge

or at least for an orange

she told me to keep quiet

as from today she was on diet.

She has noticed cellulite

and decided to get rid of it.

In the day time it was a real crime,

she didn’t put anything inside me,

so, I thought to remind her about me.

I switched on the gurgling of my gastric juice

(after all I had nothing to lose.)

at an average speed,

hoping she would hear me and would feed.

But nooooo! My anger began to grow.

I decided to strengthen the gurgling, the rumbling,

and…added a little bit of  sound.

At last she looked around

and found a cabbage leaf,

I quickly digested it and cried:

I want  beef!

At night when she went to sleep

I had only one wish – to weep.

I saw sweet dreams when she lived with her parents,

I thought she had inherited their habits.

How happy I was !

We always had the 1st, the 2nd and the 3rd course.

But hell! It was not for her so well!

She told them she had already grown

that’s why she could live on her own.

What else could  I say?

The same story happened the next day.

I was very, very angry

because I was very  hungry.

I’ve been shouting during the whole day:

Where is my salad?

Where is my soup?

Soon you won’t see me even through a loupe!

On Thursday in the day time

she gave me some plums.

But what’s happened with me? Was I really a numb?

I was so week, I felt so sick.

 Without any questions, without any digestions

I’ve passed all the plums to the bowels

for them to know the particulars.

Next morning in the bathroom

I said goodbye to all those horrible fruit.

Do you know what ‘s happened then?

She gave me some yogurt.

My God! – I thought,

now she becomes better and better.

May be I have a chance to be a little bit fatter?

But…anyway…it is early to shout “hurray”.

On Saturday she went to the restaurant with her boyfriend.

I didn’t want to offend her so I kept quiet

as I so much desired to eat:

a good piece of meet, something sweet.

You know that I didn’t eat for the whole weak.

“You look good, but you are very thin,

you have to take some food and it’s not a sin”-

the guy said with a grin.

I thought he was the greatest lad

and my dearest Laura was just mad.

It was late at night when she felt bad.

I was also feeling sad.

Martini, mushrooms, potato, beef…,

all that nice food decided to leave.

Shut up, lever! She is clever!

Everything is under control,

she knows that I hate alcohol.

At night, with a little bit of  fight,

I said goodbye to all the food she ate

without any regret.

Now I know: she doesn't like to be fat.

Next morning she drank only mineral water

her boyfriend has brought for her.

And I certainly kept quiet.

What more can I say?

We are on diet.

 

Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)

 

 

 

 

 

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