Flowers on the sill Time is now for glee flowers in the hand First loves kiss you've found flowers in the bin Young hearts fall apart Flower on its knee Blushing bride soon to be Flowers everywhere Down the aisle they all weep Flowers on the sill young cries bring tears of joy flowers once a year A son drifts far away Flowers on the earth Alone once more and week Flowers on the sill you lie and sleep Flowers on the earth At peace with him forever more © ataraxicstorm Form: Tag: life Viewed 766 Times ( 0 today ) Golden Pen Award Winner!

Comment By greesamu on 2010-08-17 at 17:48:20
very nice, the time line effect is well exhibited
Comment By mussygal on 2010-05-18 at 21:25:01
It's a lovely poem and I'm ready to read some more you have written. Congrats!..Carol R.
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-05-14 at 17:36:50
Flowers have a way of entering many aspects of our live.You have captured this beautifully.Congrats.On the Golden pen award.Blessings,Veronica
Comment By Larisa on 2010-04-13 at 13:53:19
Beautiful!
Comment By Rainbow on 2010-01-17 at 02:42:24
you are very talented and great at writing, but i voted kimmie!
Comment By lyrycsyntyme on 2010-01-16 at 14:00:35
Definitely deserving of the award! : )
Comment By Kim Keith on 2010-01-16 at 13:57:45
I love how you've illustrated a full life with flowers. Real outside-the-box thinking here.
Comment By lyrycsyntyme on 2010-01-11 at 15:30:53
Wow. I really liked it more and more as it went on and showed itself to be more a lifes story then what it initially appeared to me, which appeared to be the different ways that flowers are used in our lives. Which it managed to do, but while adding a whole story to it. Very nice.