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Poison
Poison

I pour out my heart, hoping for deliverance

 Sadly, everything returned wreaks of poison

Breathing you in causes my body slow, painful decay

 My heart shatters into a thousand screams

Dripping with my own blood and tears

 I remain cold and empty on the inside

 Finally accepting what I can no longer escape

I take in my last, dying breath



© poetryandlove2009


Form: Free Verse
Tag: memories
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Comment By lyrycsyntyme on 2010-01-12 at 00:17:08
Well this flows really well. I love the opening two lines, as well. The only suggestion i would make would be to consider giving a whack at some more unique words in replacement of some of the more common descriptive ones. But i like it, none the less. It felt very real.



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