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Butterscotch
Butterscotch

she smiles across the room and i smile back
like we're touching horizons
though, you'd say none are brighter then hers
and you wouldn't be wrong

at all

look through the periscope from my sunk-treasure soul
these waters are safe
she moves across the day so lithe, surrounded
by her long-flowing waves

of hair

and i've started from the inside out
that's what showed me the beauty of it all
now i've been washed ashore again
where i belong, where we begin

she' so lithe
and butterscotch

she glances up from her thoughts and i am pulled back
from mine escaping the season
though, you'd say none are deeper then her
almond glances and stares

into,

into the periscope of my found-treasure soul
c.p.r. by sight
her lips, her philtrum so soft even to vision
by her long-flowing wave
and her petal-soft skin

almost

almost butterscotch
and what showed showed me the beauty of her

i've started from the inside out
that's what showed me the beauty of it all
now i've been washed ashore again
where i belong, where we begin

she's so lithe
and butterscotch

and i'm barely scratching the surface, in this description
a mere glance through my periscope, into her endlessness
and you'd barely be scratching the surface,  afterall
i started from the inside out, to know what i know

she's so beautiful

© John alan Fessel



© lyrycsyntyme


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Comment By mussygal on 2010-08-22 at 14:14:32
A well deserving Golden Pen award.! Just beautiful! Carol
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-05-14 at 17:29:35
Congratulations on winning theGolden pen award.You deserved it .Such a lovelypoem.Blessings,Veronica
Comment By lyrycsyntyme on 2010-02-25 at 14:44:57
Thank you guys, so much! Sorry for the delay in response! I haven't been in lately, as i've lost my net connection at the moment, but hopefully will be up and running sooner then later. Really appreciate this! :D
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-02-22 at 13:01:05
Well done :) Use that golden pen to good effect!
Comment By saif_poetry on 2010-02-16 at 08:13:05
Congratulation !!!
Comment By ataraxicstorm on 2010-02-16 at 04:23:58
congrats on winning the golden pen award!
Comment By sanderblome on 2010-02-03 at 13:34:01
i like anything that looks different. i'll give the poem many rereads because the poet has engaged my sensibilities.
Comment By Rhumour on 2010-02-03 at 04:12:15
There's some good choices of words in this piece - a special lady indeed :)
Comment By Kim Keith on 2010-02-02 at 18:04:14
Great job. Cool descriptors...



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