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A Sunny Brook
A Sunny Brook

                                                  A Sunny Brook

 

                                           I walk along a little sunny brook, where crystal, clear waters flow.

                                            It is the most beautiful place I know.

 

                                             It's a good place to relax, read a book.

                                             Sometimes  I go there to fish,

                                             or, skip a rock, make a wish.

 

                                             Set up camp for the night,

                                             enjoy the star, and moons bright light.

 

                                              To have a little quiet time,

                                               seems to ease my mind.

                                                Where I can leave all my worries behind.

 

                                                  This is the life I love.

                                                  This peaceful little place, Iam always thinking of.

 

                                                    I will be resting peacefully, by a sunny brook.

                                                     Watching a big fish, dangle from my hook.

                                                      I love to hang out by this sunny brook.



© pamela2010


Form: Sonnet
Tag: dreamers
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Comments



Comment By ingemeldgaard on 2010-04-10 at 03:01:02
Very pretty images and with just a little more work, might be very good indeed. Check it over again for the typos, and also, I'd suggest you try either reading it aloud you yourself, or even better, sing it (being a sonnet), and check the metre - it seems a little uneven.
Comment By Larisa on 2010-04-10 at 02:06:01
Nice and charming!
Comment By Larisa on 2010-04-10 at 02:05:36
Nice and charming!
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-04-09 at 23:46:06
How Beautiful! A pleasure to read.Blessings,Veronica



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