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the butterfly and the sunset
the butterfly and the sunset



as a butterfly flutters bye my blinking eyes
he leaves behind in his wake a blazing sunset, 
glory is spent with each teaming beat of his wings
but the effort he leaves behind is most rewarding,

the butterfly and i are done so he flutters on
to go and awaken his next sleeping destiny,
twilight fills my vision and i am completely bewitched,
maybe even a little bewildered, because the sky is in bloom,   

i can't take my eyes off the palette in the sky,
its like the sun took a deep breath in and exhaled out an orgy of color,
orange overlapping red falling into pink swirling about with blue
and the clouds giving them all a bed to lie in and roll around on,

it's a display at play to signal the end of the day,
the sky is undulating and rolling while fluctuating and flowing, i can't 
believe my eyes as i'm smiling big and wide; the sky is smiling back
i can see it and i can feel it, we are enjoying each others company

and for the moment we are alone, alone on a crowded street
in the middle of the city, in the middle of it all, 
locked into each other like nothing else exists,
just me, just the gloaming 

thank you mr. butterfly



© danny


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Comment By starfish on 2010-04-11 at 22:33:13
Great poem :)
Comment By sanderblome on 2010-02-02 at 04:48:28
this poem reminds me to sense our own nearby butterflies more clearly. wishing i were even half as expressive. loved it.
Comment By jamey175 on 2010-01-25 at 09:42:22
kk its ooookk
Comment By jamey175 on 2010-01-25 at 09:42:21
kk its ooookk
Comment By jamey175 on 2010-01-25 at 09:42:18
kk its ooookk
Comment By jamey175 on 2010-01-25 at 09:41:40
kk its ooookk
Comment By saif_poetry on 2010-01-20 at 12:59:26
wow !! its really wonderful poem...last stanza.. and for the moment we are alone, alone on a crowded street in the middle of the city, in the middle of it all, locked into each other nothing else exists,
Comment By TG on 2010-01-13 at 21:43:31
amazing! truly wonderful :) as i red it, i seem to have been transferred back into my imaginary world :)
Comment By lyrycsyntyme on 2010-01-12 at 00:29:59
Such a palet portrayed, and so full of pure happiness without sounding cheesy and artificial. I love it :D
Comment By dster67 on 2009-12-22 at 22:25:33
Excellent poem my friend... excellent.
Comment By Guest on 2009-11-23 at 08:15:37
I liked this poem.
Comment By Randa on 2009-11-07 at 16:45:45
awesome imagery, your usage of metaphor is really amazing.



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