Rhumour

Rhumour is from Spalding, GB

He registered on 2009-05-14 at 03:38:14, last logged in on 2010-07-12 at 01:53:28 and was last active on 2010-07-29 at 10:58:16
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I take an interest in global issues, write articles, short stories, poetry and parodies. I live in rural England with my 2 younger children.

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Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-07-17 at 15:02:49
Thanks for the comment Dave. The "Lost Symbol" by Dan Brown was read and about halfway through the book, "Earth 2029" came to be in half-a-day. 144 and 169 are the keys I used. In my humbled opinion, religions are and have been using cubes and squared of numbers to either explain the existence of God by defining what God is not, as opposed to what God is. But what do I know as a Noetics poet as opposed to a Noetics scientist? I do know that both types have a mind. If you haven't read the book yet, I would strongly recomment it as a piece of creative fiction bordering on the possibility anything is possible in the 21st Century.
Comment By Larisa on 2010-07-17 at 04:00:04
Hi, Dave! Hi, my dear friend! I would like to thank you for all your comments on my poems, for all your kind words, for our friendship, for your help. With love and warmest wishes, Larisa
Comment By SHARON on 2010-07-15 at 20:12:22
Thank you sir, for your appreciation on my poem ...........
Comment By Indigo_Poet on 2010-07-15 at 16:56:00
Thanks Dave, Its a pleasure to read and alk about poetry and stories, art, songs, anything. I love creativity! I know Firth Park, its where some friends live. I'm on Park Hill, remember that? :) Best wishes, I'll be reading you
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-07-13 at 13:36:10
Hi Dave,Thanks for the kind comment on Waster not yourself in illusions.I feel getting older isn`t so bad either,but it`s so inconvenient sometimes. lol Blessings,Veronica
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-07-11 at 11:01:04
Thanks Dave for the comment re: Fate or Destiny and thank you for the posting or re-posting of your own Poetic Imagery. Very timely and timeless too.
Comment By mussygal on 2010-07-10 at 11:04:03
Hi Dave, thank you for the comment on Last Day of September. sometimes I miss these comments but appreciate them all. Hugs.. Carol
Comment By Larisa on 2010-07-09 at 11:33:24
Hi, Dave! Thank you for the comment on "Disappearing generation". Thank you for understanding. With warmest wishes, Larisa
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-07-03 at 09:19:46
Hi Dave, Thanks so much for your kind and generous comment on my winning the Golden pen award. Blessings,Veronica
Comment By mussygal on 2010-06-22 at 15:30:12
Thank you dear Dave, for the nice comments on 'It Is Said'. and how nice the site here is back on. Sure did miss it. hugs..Carol
Comment By mussygal on 2010-06-06 at 13:41:26
Hi Dave, thanks for your comment on 'Men'.. I do have some romantic poems after all..lol hugs....Carol
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-06-01 at 19:58:54
Thanks for the comment on Patience. I edited it just a bit to make it even more-jewel-like. Jewel like it you'll see. LOL
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-06-01 at 09:05:29
Quite a poem for the times and also very Jeffersonian in nature, where greed breeds drone-like slaves living in their hilltop mansions looking down their noses upon the common folk shaking their fists at air.
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-05-29 at 20:26:30
Thanks for your comment on my psychiatric delusion, where yes hypocrisy comes in many forms especially with this www version of quick witted self-assuredness, where attempts at stopping all wars will someday be realized by terror, loyalty, and love or faith, hope, and love, and the greatest of these is love. Poets Sixth Sense have always made some tense, until the world awakens and can smell the roses without wearing a crown of thorns in the coronal sense of the Word.
Comment By Larisa on 2010-05-28 at 06:04:15
Hi, Dave! Thanks a lot for congratulating me with my birthday. Hugs and kisses with warmest wishes.
Comment By CrossRoad on 2010-05-26 at 12:28:20
Thank you for the warm welcome. Robert
Comment By StiinaFknB on 2010-05-25 at 12:22:10
thankyou for the comment =)
Comment By leadonna12 on 2010-05-22 at 12:53:37
Very wise your a observer as I dead end makes one think
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-05-22 at 09:57:00
Thanks Dave for your comments on moral compass.I see the values changing and cringe to think what the values will be the next hundred years.Blessings,Veronica
Comment By mussygal on 2010-05-21 at 19:56:27
Hi Dave , I'm glad you liked The Artist. Your comments mean a lot. Thanks so much..Carol
Comment By mussygal on 2010-05-20 at 15:29:32
Thank you Dave, for the comment on First Born. Sometimes we appreciate the miracle of birth, more, as we ourselves grow a bit older hugs..Carol
Comment By DanRayM on 2010-05-19 at 19:35:07
Thanks for the comment on my poem "Lost" I wrote it really quickly and never thought of it the way you described it. I like your interpretation.
Comment By mussygal on 2010-05-19 at 10:57:17
Hi Dave, thanks for your comment on "Down the Road". Summers at the creek I sat watching the kids play and did some wading myself. It was our "swimming pool" with a few unwanted snakes lol. Smiles, Carol
Comment By marja on 2010-05-19 at 05:27:59
Thanks dave for your encouragement
Comment By Larisa on 2010-05-18 at 14:45:26
My pleasure, Dave, to send you comments. Warmest wishes, Larisa
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-05-17 at 19:52:19
Thanks Dave for the comment. I'm not sure whether I am a real cynicalist or a realist with tones of cynicism. I believe its about making brighter futures for all children while being confused about others actions toward our future diplomats.
Comment By Larisa on 2010-05-15 at 13:41:56
Do you think it was a slightly subtle touch? It was a straight hint for a big feint. lol
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-05-13 at 19:34:00
I am currently living in a place called the lighthouse, where directly above our computer is a picture of a lighthouse in a storm with the saying, "Sometimes in the winds of change we find our true direction." I hope to find my way back to my true love across this sea of cement. So, your poem is already timeless in the sense of today, where only an ocean separates realities of our not so distant past. Thanks Dave.
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-05-12 at 09:16:03
Thanks for your comment on Melchior the Mennonite.I`m very proud of the strength of my ancestors.I have a few black sheep running around also. lol Blessings,Veronica
Comment By sharon slaton howell on 2010-05-12 at 05:44:18
Hi there Dave, Two things this morning: have you fixed on a title for the book you're gathering poems for, and 2) when you speak to the guys who run this site, could you mention something? If we could know which poem of ours someone is commenting upon, it would save going back through scads of them. Enjoying your poems! Sharon
Comment By Larisa on 2010-05-08 at 05:27:29
Thank you my dear friend for your comment on "The Victory Day". With warmest wishes, Larisa
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-05-06 at 15:40:45
Thanks Dave,You so kind with your comments.By the way love your new profile pic.Hummm You know a secret we don`t.lol Blessings,Veronica
Comment By BbobbyrobertsS on 2010-05-05 at 18:22:47
thanks man, i really want my poetry to be published and stuff. so this site looks to be the best.
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-05-04 at 19:22:33
Thanks Dave for your kind comment on Perfect lover.Blessings,Veronica
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-04-27 at 17:56:34
Nice photo.I see you smiling!
Comment By marja on 2010-04-27 at 11:18:25
Thanks Dave for your comments on "Make me a memory"..cheers
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-04-26 at 20:03:44
It never does sir...your words are far from boring...trust me on how insightful they are to me as I am certain they are to others
Comment By rich the poet on 2010-04-26 at 16:15:31
thank you for being the great poet that you are,for you give hope and direction for those willing to go the distance..blessings..your fan,.,Rich
Comment By ColinLee on 2010-04-21 at 07:15:00
Well done on the "pen" award will always look out for your work, congratulations. Mindhowyago Colin.
Comment By starfish on 2010-04-18 at 00:00:15
Congratulations on the Golden Pen award! You deserved it :)
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-04-17 at 09:04:34
congratulations on the Golden pen award. Your writings are an inspiration to me. I am learning a lot from you. Blessings,Veronica
Comment By rich the poet on 2010-04-13 at 21:21:09
great write! thanks for the share..
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-04-13 at 19:47:50
Your work is timeless and thought provoking. Thank you for such surreal wisdom.
Comment By Larisa on 2010-04-13 at 18:54:55
They were not just kind comments. I always say what comes from my heart. With warmest wishes, your friend, Larisa
Comment By valeria on 2010-04-12 at 20:08:57
Thank you for the warm welcome!
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-04-10 at 18:11:17
Hi Dave, Thanks so much for your comment on confession of a addict. I tried to write this one kind of like your poem "Still warmth". With the surprise last line. Did you have it figured out before the end?Blessings,Veronica
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-04-08 at 12:36:56
Thanks Dave for your comments on The Boogie man.Yes it just as you precieved it. Blessings,Veronica
Comment By sweetmercyday4 on 2010-04-07 at 04:23:58
Thanks so much for your comments on Coal town sons. I value your opinion. Dont be afraid to give me pointers.Thats how i wil improve.I have only ever written three poems.blessings, veronica
Comment By sharon slaton howell on 2010-04-04 at 13:25:07
Interesting poem, Dave. Especially the need to leave no trails of damage. How is your book coming along? Sharon
Comment By marja on 2010-03-31 at 04:43:52
Thanks for your comment on "just as I am". What you said is true
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-03-29 at 23:00:56
You are an amazing visionary of war and peace; love and hate; light and dark; exposing that which many don't see or attempt to deny. Thank you for your introspective wisdom.
Comment By petemarshall1 on 2010-03-29 at 09:08:57
Hi & thanks for the welcome. seems a pleasant place to be!
Comment By coffeehousepoet on 2010-03-27 at 10:17:20
Very beautiful imagery about world affairs and the vision for peaceful solutions amidst this world of turmoil. Thank you for your Toorid Stew and Earthquake visions of Enochian tragedies of mankind.
Comment By sharon slaton howell on 2010-03-25 at 05:12:15
Very interesting, Rhumour. Will have to read it more than once to get all that's in it. By the by, from whence "Rhumour"--if you care to tell. Sharon
Comment By Monica Aurora on 2010-03-25 at 00:31:21
Mr. Rhumour, I have posted a small comment for your well-rhymed poem:Orbiting.
Comment By Larisa on 2010-03-24 at 18:18:06
It's not a busy time for me to read your poems. It's an enjoyable time. Thank you for giving me an opportunity to read your poems. Warmest wishes. Larisa
Comment By sharon slaton howell on 2010-03-24 at 06:01:01
It's me again, with a question! Where should I put my thank-you's to comments people make on my poems? Can't see where they are being posted for others to see. You mentioned it would be better to not put them under profiles, so that others could read. Where are viewers seeing them though? Sharon
Comment By marja on 2010-03-23 at 06:32:07
Yup.."the Quest"...at my age...I accept whatever I can get
Comment By sharon slaton howell on 2010-03-21 at 15:29:41
Hehe right back to you! Glad you think so... ssh
Comment By Larisa on 2010-03-21 at 06:54:31
Hi, Dave! Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity to share my poems with so many nice people I've met on this site. I am really happy. Warmest wishes. Larisa
Comment By sharon slaton howell on 2010-03-18 at 08:28:44
Hi there Rhumour, Really like your latest! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sharon Slaton Howell
Comment By sharon slaton howell on 2010-03-17 at 05:15:39
Mornin' Rhumour (as I now say since we moved down South from Boston), Thanks for your comment. And I really like "Uncovered." Puts the reader right in the place you're describing. Happy day, Sharon Slaton Howell
Comment By Bernard Shaw on 2010-03-08 at 05:42:31
Boy you certainly caught me with this one. I was thinking Murder,a good old fashioned Murder. The poor dear was just giving some of her precious Blood. Excellent piece Bern.
Comment By scheherazodd on 2010-03-08 at 02:31:57
Thanks for your comment on "Lost Words." While poetry may be alive in the UK, I wish it were a little healthier here in the states. One would think that since Spokane is so close to Seattle, we'd have a great performance circuit, but sadly, that is not the case.
Comment By marja on 2010-03-04 at 11:11:45
Thanks for your comment on GB. He was a great architect
Comment By Bernard Shaw on 2010-03-01 at 12:07:47
Excellent poem. Thanks for sharing. Bern I live in Graz Southern Austria. My speciality is writing Fairy Stories for the kids.
Comment By lyrycsyntyme on 2010-02-25 at 14:46:09
Thanks so much, for the compliments and congrats on Butterscotch : ) Sorry for the delay in response, my net is off right now and it's hard for me to get here, otherwise. But trying to work that out. Anyhow, i really appreciate it, thank you : )
Comment By sanderblome on 2010-02-18 at 10:23:53
Re: "Chips and Dips.." How noisy can I get? Gentleman never tell :-)
Comment By dster67 on 2010-02-12 at 08:08:05
Tx for your comment my friend. Excellent quote, yours?
Comment By danny on 2010-02-09 at 03:36:42
well rhumour has it... (i write good for a ghost) thank yous for the compliment, it is much appreciated... big smile
Comment By saif_poetry on 2010-01-16 at 11:38:30
In this poem Appearence the reality of life..really nice poem...well done..
Comment By dster67 on 2009-12-23 at 21:33:09
I like this piece... it's light and free.
Comment By Kim Keith on 2009-12-23 at 12:51:07
What a great picture! Happy holidays!
Comment By ataraxicstorm on 2009-12-23 at 11:13:26
love the pic santa... you could be related lol happy christmas!
Comment By marja on 2009-12-23 at 11:01:08
hah i see... in the xmas spirit already? merry xmas santa clause... hehe
Comment By ataraxicstorm on 2009-09-14 at 02:19:52
Hopefully we wont have any more problems with spam comments on profiles, thanks for letting me know about it! Let me know though if you do get any more.

A Certain Lady

 

There's a certain wistful aspect to her gentle grace

A fair haired lovely with elegance embedded in her face

Clear eyed and full lipped with cheekbones well defined

And just to top that outer view is the beauty of her mind

Such a combination must be more than many men can bear

So much for them to live up to - may they hope they can ensnare

A lady filled with passions that are reserved just for that one

Who offers safety for her heart and can carry her along

With them hand in hand till the night is never gone

Amid the certain knowledge that they will ever look upon

A sight that others cannot as her views are just for him

The truth is that within their bond there never will be sin

For sin is just for other souls that have yet come to learn

Without deep trust and honesty they just cannot discern

The reality of true love is we hold the other high

In every way above ourselves and without the need to ply

Our troth with false pretences in the hope that they might sway

The other's will towards us without a momentary delay

For time is well invested only when all is sincere

Then we will have earned the right to call the other dear 

©Rhumour

March 7th 2009

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